Question Number One Response

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I find revising my work for quality the most challenging part of any writing assignments. This is due mostly to the fact that whenever I change my original responses, my work usually either tends to be either worse than it was to start, or it was a tedious change that has little effect on the overall quality of my current topic. For example, revising my wording from "to end with," vs. "finally,".
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In order to improve my skills in this area of writing, I think that I should focus more on "spicing up" my essays with interesting vocabulary, instead of making pointless tweaks to my grammar structure or wording. As it pertains to the example in the preceding heading, I have lately been using "in cessation" as a more mature and advanced way of bringing about an ending.